I wrote tonight's song rather quickly so it is rather short. I like the potential of it, it has a calm lullaby feel and I love lullabies, but not all the lines are quite the thing For example, the last two lines. Or the fourth line. Actually I like the fourth line, I think "night light riot" has a nice ring to it, but what does it even mean? Nothing. Something about the stars I guess. And it rhymes with quiet.
One has a need to go to bed.
"Night Light Riot"
Its the end of the day
The house is quiet
Outside on display
A night light riot
The baby's asleep
The dishes will keep
One has a need
To sing this song
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